I don't have a problem with minor typos and more obscure grammatical errors, but you should always use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence,...for proper nouns, and the word "I". Try not to use tense shifting, it's one of my pet peeves. Tense shifting is when you start a chapter in one tense and suddenly shift to another at a random point for no reason. As a general rule, this story is in present tense, unless you are using a flashback.Keep in mind that this story should be in second. He now started to fuck all the way out and in. Building speed he fucked her for a good ten minutes and she was moaning as quietly as she could. He felt her come again and let go himself and pulsed his come inside her. He collapsed on top of her, and then heard a slow clap. Stacey was stood at the door, naked and had obviously been enjoying the spectacle. ‘Steal my fuck would you’ she smiled. She entered the room and went straight to Chris’s cunt. She licked Mal’s cum dripping out of Chris and. More

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