I think you "homogenize" a story by over editing. The thing that usually gets left on the cutting floor is emotion.(Mindy) You mean that by over-edi...ing they edit out the raw emotion?(Raven) Yes. over-editing weeds out raw emotion. I once read a simple formula for writing/editing that I follow. It works. You write a story three times:1) On the first pass, you write the basic plot.2) On the next pass, add a sentence between every sentence that you've already written. It should be. We parked on the hill, and the pilot pointed out where the clinic was. He had been there a number of times and remembered a group of three palm trees, close together, making a perfect triangle. We could see the top part of these trees standing forlorn above the mud. It was a sad tribute to a former place of hope.I wanted to go to the trees and dig deep looking for my love but I knew it made no sense. It would be like looking in the ocean for a particular drop of water. Later the Peruvian. More

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